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guysterrules
guysterrules
Like a good student...
As assigned by thirdreel via drood:

Write two very short stories about yourself. The word count for each story needs to be exactly 100 words. One of the stories will be true, something that really happened to you, and the other will be a lie. Don't tell which is which.

I think I'll call my two stories, What'cha gonna do when they come for you?.

1.
Three squad cars were in the circular driveway of my apartment last night, and my stomach performed a perfect triple axel. I peered in the large glass doors before swiping my security key. No police were in sight, just the concierge, Jasmine, and a thin man in his forties waiting for a package.

I passed by Jasmine, commenting, “This is quite an exciting building. What’s going on?”

“Domestic violence call. Apartment 1205.”

“I feel like I’m back home in Venice,” I said, and the elevator door opened. Riding up to my apartment, I clenched when I passed the number 12.


2.
He said he was a cop, but the only thing I could really determine was that he had a few extra pounds around his middle and a regulation mustache. I knew he wanted more, forcing his mouth further down toward my balls. I squeezed the base of my dick, its veins a purple road map, and he moaned, his right arm moving to his own rhythm.

A car passed by, its headlights letting me see for a split second that a dark raised scar ran the length of his neck. I reached down to touch it, but he stopped me.



Your turn.
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guysterrules From: guysterrules Date: January 14th, 2005 07:29 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yeah, but they fall apart at the 101st word.
backawayslowly From: backawayslowly Date: January 17th, 2005 08:35 pm (UTC) (Link)
just like my haiku
which seem to degrade at the
eightteenth syllable
grrtigger From: grrtigger Date: January 14th, 2005 07:24 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hm! I may try my hand at this one.
grrtigger From: grrtigger Date: January 14th, 2005 08:41 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, and I did ...

ps, I know I don't comment often on your writing, but I do always enjoy reading it. You are braver at sharing than I ;)
quuf From: quuf Date: January 14th, 2005 07:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
Talk about the literary equivalent of 'blue balls' . . . I want more!
privatesector From: privatesector Date: January 14th, 2005 08:11 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hmmm

Just how many florrs does your new building have?
privatesector From: privatesector Date: January 14th, 2005 08:12 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oops, I meant, 'floors.'
ubermunkey From: ubermunkey Date: January 16th, 2005 05:11 am (UTC) (Link)
ah well done. I kind of want them both to be true!

be well bub
cricketshay From: cricketshay Date: January 16th, 2005 10:06 am (UTC) (Link)
Ok I did it and posted the end result in my journal. Interesting exercise. I liked yours. Very inspirational.
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